Great start and I notice a rhyme scheme throughout. The last stanza, after some thought, I would say is sort of vague, and leaves me to guessing what it was -- not sure if you meant that!

The Real Estate Waiting Game Volume 18 inspired by RhymeLovingWriter staaariiiing??// 07-18-2016, 03:20 PM I'm sitting at the reception desk, success is within my reach when all of a …

Posts Latest Activity Photos Search Page of 1 Filter Time Show Filtered by: new posts rhymarhyma Senior Member Join Date:Jan 2015 Posts:430 Share Tweet #1 Two sides of I'm …

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Drug induced Psychosis 03-24-2016, 04:27 PM Every time I begin a psychosis cycle of a psychotic attack Its from actual reality I then be detached Some lessons I've learnt from others …

Stomach pains: But not sure if it's from society's pollution or propagandas dissolution I'm sick. and I'm not sure if it's from all the anxiety of my

Sep 13, 2016 · Similarly, the internal rhyme of 'And the caisson sits, to which he’s hitched' was a nice little counterpoint to the end rhyme and a bit of a crescendo before the conclusion. I …

I am remembering my father's passing this week, and would like to share a selection of 3 poems I've written in his memory over a number of years. ABUNDANCE

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I've heard the grass is greener On the other side. I've heard that you will never know at least until you've tried. I've heard about still waters I've